Hello Folks
I'm going to show you how to compose text (or draft) or a paragraph by a correct way: Before starting, we have to pass by 3 process to have the good redaction for a text (or draft) or paragraph:
- Prewriting: It's the first process to start to write a draft. This process consists on setting ahead a little bit of information about the draft to be written. It can be through a little summary, introduction or tags, yes, tags, as the next example will show it.
- Writing or Drafting: It's the second and the middle process to write a draft. It's where you have to write the draft in that process without worring about correcting ortographical and redaccion mistakes.
- Final Drafting or Final Writing: It's the third and the last process to write, I mean, to finish the draaft. In that process, you do need to fix every mistakes that the Writing or Drafting (The second process) indicates you to.
Here is an example:
Prewriting
Joseph - Lizzie - Marital Situation - Changing Life - Love - Final Consequences
Writing
Joseph was a bank assistant who wanted to get marry because he was fed up with keeping as a single man. One day, he got a date with a secretary of his friend. They were in love with each other, on and on, until marrying. The years had gone by, Joseph discovered his wife had become a lazy and bossy woman that made him change his atitude and go down-on-earth.
Final Writing
Once upon a time, there was an English single man who has ever looked forward to marrying any day. His name is Joseph. He lives by himself in his flat in Vienna downtown. Joseph has always characterized as a chauvinist, homophobic and selfish man that always hated to do things housekeepers usually do. He has worked as a bank assistant in the “Österreiche Bank” for over 10 years old. Joseph is always cooling dressed (like men, at this age, dress up). His mood is characterized as easy-going and kind of idiot-headed.
One day, when he was washing dishes, he came up with calling his friend’s secretary, who was single too and searching for a “new husband”.
So Joseph came up with calling her in the living room and proposed her a date in some place. The day had come when both of them met there and talked a lot and it went on and on. Her name is Lizzie.
One day, as Lizzie’s house were under leasing, and suddenly destroyed and burnt by vandal children during protests about opposition of Euro-currency crisis. She started to reside in Joseph’s flat. At the night, Joseph prepared the dinner and had a surprise for Lizzie. While having dinner, Joseph showed a ring to her which he wanted her to bear. She got excited and said: Yes, I do marry to you.
They got married in a church in Riga, the same city where they have a honeymoon. They looked excited for this day, and were very happy.
Several years later, he noticed that his wife had changed; he had got very bossy and very lazy.
That’s why Joseph started to do things he always hated like wash dishes, wash clothes and clean the entire house. And the final was a little bit happy ever after.
That is the reflection what I learn about
Bye, I hope it useful for you folks
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